It's the final count down

I am going to cut out unneeded phrases like "One previous example" and "according to". My sentence flow was not as improved as it was so I will be manipulating awkward sentences. I will explain each of my point I was trying to make because I assumed too much. Chunky and blocky paragraphs will be shortened and sentences will be rearranged in order to have better structure. Lastly, I will clearly establish what I am trying to get to before going into detail about it.