Saturday, July 23, 2011

Spot the diff

I noticed in the essays that I feel like my narrative writing is more like the one written on video game addiction. I may realize they are not similar after I have written my own, but as of now that is the one i see my writing most like. I can see a major difference in the writing about being a hero because of the style that was involved. I saw a huge difference in the entire layout of the essay and also the transitions of the paper was very well put together.

  In the video game addiction paper, the audience could be anywhere from people who are addicting and looking to get out, to parents who's kids are addicted to video games, at least they think, and want to know how to stop it.

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